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 Michael, Akio, Yuko and the rest are searching for the pieces necessary to put together a craft which Michael hopes will take him to Bethany Anne. But first, there are idiots in his way, seeking the same parts and intend to take them.
 By force.The challenge is they will find out what ‘force’ truly means when they dare to go up against the Dark Messiah. One way or another, Michael will get back to Bethany Anne.

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     Michael, Akio, Yuko and the rest are searching for the pieces necessary to put together a craft which Michael hopes will take him to Bethany Anne. But first, there are idiots in his way, seeking the same parts and intend to take them.
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                              Then they would continue the search for the Kurtherians.
                                                         Together.

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-Michael, Akio, Yuko and the rest are searching for the pieces necessary to put together a craft which Michael hopes will take him to Bethany Anne. But first, there are idiots in his way, seeking the same parts and intend to take them.
+   Michael, Akio, Yuko and the rest are searching for the pieces necessary to put together a craft which Michael hopes will take him to Bethany Anne. But first, there are idiots in his way, seeking the same parts and intend to take them.
 By force.The challenge is they will find out what ‘force’ truly means when they dare to go up against the Dark Messiah. One way or another, Michael will get back to Bethany Anne.

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−	04/11 '''BETHANY ANNE ~~RETURNS~~ TO EARTH ! ! '''	+	04/11 '''BETHANY ANNE ANNOUNCES RETURN TO EARTH ! ! '''

	“Hello,” she started, her eyes staring through the screen as if she were peering into his soul and his brain. “I am Bethany Anne Nacht. My ships will be arriving in approximately four days. Your telescopes will start to see the evidence of our armada shortly. I am providing this video on known government frequencies to allow you a chance to minimize the frenzy a space fleet might cause over Earth. You have been notified. If you happen to have my love in anything less than the best shape, I will rip your country apart and bury you under it.” She smiled happily. “Otherwise, have a good day!” Communication was restored to all channels. Spaceships were seen and discusses, Michael named and shown as her “her love”, Yuko, etc., reassured they would be safe, to not move!		“Hello,” she started, her eyes staring through the screen as if she were peering into his soul and his brain. “I am Bethany Anne Nacht. My ships will be arriving in approximately four days. Your telescopes will start to see the evidence of our armada shortly. I am providing this video on known government frequencies to allow you a chance to minimize the frenzy a space fleet might cause over Earth. You have been notified. If you happen to have my love in anything less than the best shape, I will rip your country apart and bury you under it.” She smiled happily. “Otherwise, have a good day!” Communication was restored to all channels. Spaceships were seen and discusses, Michael named and shown as her “her love”, Yuko, etc., reassured they would be safe, to not move!

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 /14     Two groups meet while Michael and Bethany Anne fight, begin to make bets on how many times they will appear. Lots of discussion, Gabrielle wins, with guess of 21 times, the fewest number. (20 or 21?) Guards learn that Jacqueline, Mark are Michael’s wards, a legacy from Gerry, Jacqueline’s Dad, who had survived on Earth long enough for Michael to come back and assume protection/guidance for them. Bethany Anne and Michael stay in Etheric for a while, talk.  Michael, in Myst form when bomb exploded, was blown into Etheric as molecules. Took him ages to reconstitute, probably not before she had left Earth. That’s why she could never find him there. He wasn’t solid. When they come out, the other had left to up to ArchAngel II. Shinigami picked up Bethany Anne and Michael. Jacqueline, Mark, Akio talk with ArchAngel until they get there, see Yollins and Leath as they disembark. Met by Gabrielle.
-/15     '''gerry, caurn retrieved'''    Giles meets Yuko, Eve, Jacqueline, Mark, Akio. Is to go down to Earth with them, as well as Barnabas. They go to Old Denver, to retrieve Gerry’s remains. Take four ships, meet current pack, are shown respect. Ships lift cairn, rocks, dirt, all, to take to ArchAngel, for burial and disposal. Were pack will be supplied with necessities, as a thank you.
+/15     '''GERRY, CAIRN RETRIEVED'''    Giles meets Yuko, Eve, Jacqueline, Mark, Akio. Is to go down to Earth with them, as well as Barnabas. They go to Old Denver, to retrieve Gerry’s remains. Take four ships, meet current pack, are shown respect. Ships lift cairn, rocks, dirt, all, to take to ArchAngel, for burial and disposal. Were pack will be supplied with necessities, as a thank you.
-/17 '''On a Date'''     Michael takes Bethany Anne out on a date (bring your guns), to dispatch Kuro, Chinese who had headed the activity trying to get the spaceship. 13 dead later, they go upstairs to finish up their date.
+/17 '''ON A DATE'''     Michael takes Bethany Anne out on a date (bring your guns), to dispatch Kuro, Chinese who had headed the activity trying to get the spaceship. 13 dead later, they go upstairs to finish up their date.
-/18, 19     ''Giles, Sightseeing in Japan''     Eve and Yuko take Giles on sight-seeing tour of Japan. He wants to see the Senate (one of the “best” places), now wants to see a “worst place”, the Golden Gai, then another bar, with lots of “animals”, black-lights, etc. Giles gets VERY drunk, talking about Dieties, the Patriarch, and other things he shouldn’t have, endangering the image they want to project, and their operation. Just too big a mouth.  Eve brings him home, as Yuko has gone off to see Inspector Hirano, her love.
+/18, 19     '''GILES SIGHTSEEING IN JAPAN'''     Eve and Yuko take Giles on sight-seeing tour of Japan. He wants to see the Senate (one of the “best” places), now wants to see a “worst place”, the Golden Gai, then another bar, with lots of “animals”, black-lights, etc. Giles gets VERY drunk, talking about Dieties, the Patriarch, and other things he shouldn’t have, endangering the image they want to project, and their operation. Just too big a mouth.  Eve brings him home, as Yuko has gone off to see Inspector Hirano, her love.
 /20     Bethany Anne and group decide to not stay on Earth too long- will only complicate matters, bring back old behaviors. . Bethany Anne huffed in annoyance. “Ok, let’s get our people, make sure we have finished all the tasks we have to do, and get the fuck off this planet. We aren’t helping it by being here.” Retrieve people in Japan, contact Terry Henry Walton. Meet Dokken.
-/16     '''Giles and the Kurtherian Ship'''
+/16     '''GILES AND THE KURTHERIAN SHIP'''
 Giles is taken to the location of the sixteen crates, starts to open, examine them.
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 /20, 21     '''GILES ON AN EXPEDITION'''
 In searching the continent for traces of the civilization his father had talked about, and the glories of the country, Giles comes across a wasteland, and then a group of people traveling across it. Surveying the group, he found them living in tents, with mats, no shoes, little food or clothing, decides to help. Dwayne, their leader (youngish, blue eyes, white hair from the sun, tanned, wrinkled skin), shows him the camp. Looking for a place with water, to make a camp, and settle down, grow food, survive. Giles take Bernie, one of the men, to look around, find closest area. Find a good place, Giles starts transporting by Pod, automatically, to help them get there.
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 /22   '''FREEING THE QUEEN'S ELITES'''
 Will need battleship War Axe, (heavy lifting capabilities) to rescue Elite, complete project. Was upset with Earth’s attitudes to date, so raced through atmosphere at 30+ Machs. The War Axe approached the Pod hovering a half-mile above the collapsed building Akio had protected for the past hundred and fifty years. Eight stories under some hundred-thousand tons of rubble, six Elite warriors awakened from the deep sleep which had helped slow their aging. They had been buried inadvertently back when chaos ruled the world (An earthquake had dropped a building on them right after WWDE). They had almost failed in their rescue. But Akio had found help. Former Marine Terry Henry Walton and his werewolf partner-wife Charumati had joined forces with the Queen’s Bitch to drag humanity back to civilization, a hundred and fifty-plus-year effort. The Defender-series destroyer had the Etheric Empire’s latest traction to tractor-beam technology. Using all the power available to it, the ship latched onto the building and picked it up en masse. Akio’s Pod, swooped above the hole and stopped in mid-air, then dropped. A hundred feet down the Pod settled, and the rear ramp dropped. Six vampires were waiting. Their clothes were old, largely just rags after more than a hundred and fifty years. Akio stepped out and bowed deeply to his fellows.
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 /22, 23     '''TERRY HENRY WALTON'''
 Terry Henry Walton TH to his friends, stood tall and proud, his black Force de Guerre uniform crisp.  waiting with his “pack”, all of the people who had helped maintain civilization during the 150 years - His werewolf wife Charumati (who was worried that so much energy was being drawn from the Etheric), Joseph and his wife Petricia (two Forsaken, who refused to drink human blood), were tigers (Aaron and Yanmei), Felicity ,enhanced, holding the hand of her werewolf husband Ted, and their daughter Marcie (nanocytes from Felicity), Kimber and her brother Kae (TH and Char’s adopted children), Charumati’s pack (Sue, Timmons, Shonna, and Merrit and their mates). All waited as a ship landed, and Akio walked out, joined by six other vampires, the Queen’s Elite, who had just been recently released from their entombment.

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 “Hello,” she started, her eyes staring through the screen as if she were peering into his soul and his brain. “I am Bethany Anne Nacht. My ships will be arriving in approximately four days. Your telescopes will start to see the evidence of our armada shortly. I am providing this video on known government frequencies to allow you a chance to minimize the frenzy a space fleet might cause over Earth. You have been notified. If you happen to have my love in anything less than the best shape, I will rip your country apart and bury you under it.” She smiled happily. “Otherwise, have a good day!” Communication was restored to all channels. Spaceships were seen and discusses, Michael named and shown as her “her love”, Yuko, etc., reassured they would be safe, to not move!
-      One hundred hours later, this message appeared over the world:
+One hundred hours later, this message appeared over the world:
 “My name is Bethany Anne Nacht, and I was at one time the leader of TQB Enterprises. I have come back to Earth to set up a planetary orbital defense system. We call it the ‘BYPS system.’”
 “I am going to arrive over your country in twenty-four hours. Well, I and some of my ships. We are going to meet with our people who are in your country, and then around the world. We are not here to attack you, so do not attack us.” Her eyes flared red. “If we are attacked, be aware I will rain fire and destruction on those who attack us, the likes of which have not been seen in the history of our planet.”
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 /6 - 10     '''NANOCYTE LABS'''
 Michael, Akio visit building, find little wrong above floors, explore bottom floors.
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 /24     '''PICKING UP VALERIE'''
 Valerie, her partner Robin, Sandra, her friend, Sandra’s husband Diego and their baby Valerie, named after her, meet Michael on a street in New York. Michael invites Valerie and Robin to join them on the ship. It’s time.
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 /25     '''YUKO'S HAPPINESS'''
 Thanks to Eve’s continual nagging, Yuko is seeing Hirano before she leaves – result of visit unknown. “I wanted to see you before we go.” “So you’re leaving?”  “It’s my duty. My life is out there...with my people.” “So you just came to say good-bye.” “Well, no. It depends.”  “It’s like... Well, I made a mistake, Hirano.” “Now we’re leaving in a few hours and it’s the last chance I have to see you and I wanted to ask... Do you want to come with us? I mean, with me specifically?” “Yuko, of course I do. I just wish you hadn’t left me hanging all this time.” “I feel awful, pulling you away from your life.”He wrapped his arms around her. “I am blessed to have some good friends, but the one thing I’ve learned so far in my very short life is that the only constant is change. I’m excited to move on to the next chapter.” Somewhere in the world dawn had arrived. Not just physically, but in her heart as well.
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 /25     '''ON DEVON'''
 Kiel and Kael-ven “… are both ready to live a sedately dangerous life.” Talking with Michael, Eric, Scott, Darryl, about future activities. Bethany Anne walks in. Something different about her? YES! She’s pregnant. She and Michael talk a bit, both are immensely pleased, with all of the family they have and will develop, and their future activities. Together they turned toward the guys and walked over, ready to go down to the planet they would call home for a while.

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	04/1 - 5 '''SACRED CLAN'S KURTHERIAN SPACE SHIP'''		04/1 - 5 '''SACRED CLAN'S KURTHERIAN SPACE SHIP'''
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	Group plans on how to proceed. Will need Assembly factory, somewhere on outskirts of China. Will interview workers in Japan (best tech workers), export to facility. Akio and Michael to handle interviews (mind-reading), find two plants by enemies. Hire them.		Group plans on how to proceed. Will need Assembly factory, somewhere on outskirts of China. Will interview workers in Japan (best tech workers), export to facility. Akio and Michael to handle interviews (mind-reading), find two plants by enemies. Hire them.

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 /1 - 5     '''SACRED CLAN'S KURTHERIAN SPACE SHIP'''
 Group plans on how to proceed. Will need Assembly factory, somewhere on outskirts of China. Will interview workers in Japan (best tech workers), export to facility. Akio and Michael to handle interviews (mind-reading), find two plants by enemies. Hire them.
 Eleven boxes to dig up by hand. Yuko, Eve, Akio, Jacqueline, Mark, Sabine.
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 Third level down, cages. Animals, 7 humans, six male, one female. Knowing he would attack, Michael locked door between second and third levels, breaking off knob as well.
 Four men, two lab tech (Isami – arc-rod, Goro-choke collar)s, two security guards (Choki, Zan –submachine guns), were approaching female, Tanith’s, cage. Would shock her, incapacitate her, tie her up, do experiments. Last injections had stopped her transformations, but left her all of her Wechselbalg enhancements.
-Touched shock rod to cage, electrocuting her mildly, then, when chokehold firm, on her body, torturing her on purpose. (spasms, pain)
+Touched shock rod to cage, electrocuting her mildly, then, when chokehold firm, on her body, torturing her on purpose. spasms, pain)
 Michael introduced himself, killed two guards, pushed third one, Goro, into cage so that Tanith could kill him. She did.
 Freed of cage, she helped Michael, going to Gaku and Shiang’s cage, while Michael gave them shot to bring them up to full consciousness. Michael pushed energy into their bodies, to help them, reading minds. Tanith didn’t trust him, wanted to ditch him. Michael planned to burn down the labs. As fire was starting, another voice was heard, the mountain lion, in a glass cage at the back of the lab.  Michael rescued her, also.
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 /20, 21     '''GILES ON AN EXPEDITION'''
 In searching the continent for traces of the civilization his father had talked about, and the glories of the country, Giles comes across a wasteland, and then a group of people traveling across it. Surveying the group, he found them living in tents, with mats, no shoes, little food or clothing, decides to help. Dwayne, their leader (youngish, blue eyes, white hair from the sun, tanned, wrinkled skin), shows him the camp. Looking for a place with water, to make a camp, and settle down, grow food, survive. Giles take Bernie, one of the men, to look around, find closest area. Find a good place, Giles starts transporting by Pod, automatically, to help them get there.
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 /22   '''FREEING THE QUEEN'S ELITES'''
 Will need battleship War Axe, (heavy lifting capabilities) to rescue Elite, complete project. Was upset with Earth’s attitudes to date, so raced through atmosphere at 30+ Machs. The War Axe approached the Pod hovering a half-mile above the collapsed building Akio had protected for the past hundred and fifty years. Eight stories under some hundred-thousand tons of rubble, six Elite warriors awakened from the deep sleep which had helped slow their aging. They had been buried inadvertently back when chaos ruled the world (An earthquake had dropped a building on them right after WWDE). They had almost failed in their rescue. But Akio had found help. Former Marine Terry Henry Walton and his werewolf partner-wife Charumati had joined forces with the Queen’s Bitch to drag humanity back to civilization, a hundred and fifty-plus-year effort. The Defender-series destroyer had the Etheric Empire’s latest traction to tractor-beam technology. Using all the power available to it, the ship latched onto the building and picked it up en masse. Akio’s Pod, swooped above the hole and stopped in mid-air, then dropped. A hundred feet down the Pod settled, and the rear ramp dropped. Six vampires were waiting. Their clothes were old, largely just rags after more than a hundred and fifty years. Akio stepped out and bowed deeply to his fellows.
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 /22, 23     '''TERRY HENRY WALTON'''
 Terry Henry Walton TH to his friends, stood tall and proud, his black Force de Guerre uniform crisp.  waiting with his “pack”, all of the people who had helped maintain civilization during the 150 years - His werewolf wife Charumati (who was worried that so much energy was being drawn from the Etheric), Joseph and his wife Petricia (two Forsaken, who refused to drink human blood), were tigers (Aaron and Yanmei), Felicity ,enhanced, holding the hand of her werewolf husband Ted, and their daughter Marcie (nanocytes from Felicity), Kimber and her brother Kae (TH and Char’s adopted children), Charumati’s pack (Sue, Timmons, Shonna, and Merrit and their mates). All waited as a ship landed, and Akio walked out, joined by six other vampires, the Queen’s Elite, who had just been recently released from their entombment.
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 /24     '''PICKING UP VALERIE'''
 Valerie, her partner Robin, Sandra, her friend, Sandra’s husband Diego and their baby Valerie, named after her, meet Michael on a street in New York. Michael invites Valerie and Robin to join them on the ship. It’s time.
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 /25     '''YUKO'S HAPPINESS'''
 Thanks to Eve’s continual nagging, Yuko is seeing Hirano before she leaves – result of visit unknown. “I wanted to see you before we go.” “So you’re leaving?”  “It’s my duty. My life is out there...with my people.” “So you just came to say good-bye.” “Well, no. It depends.”  “It’s like... Well, I made a mistake, Hirano.” “Now we’re leaving in a few hours and it’s the last chance I have to see you and I wanted to ask... Do you want to come with us? I mean, with me specifically?” “Yuko, of course I do. I just wish you hadn’t left me hanging all this time.” “I feel awful, pulling you away from your life.”He wrapped his arms around her. “I am blessed to have some good friends, but the one thing I’ve learned so far in my very short life is that the only constant is change. I’m excited to move on to the next chapter.” Somewhere in the world dawn had arrived. Not just physically, but in her heart as well.
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 /25     '''ON DEVON'''
 Kiel and Kael-ven “… are both ready to live a sedately dangerous life.” Talking with Michael, Eric, Scott, Darryl, about future activities. Bethany Anne walks in. Something different about her? YES! She’s pregnant. She and Michael talk a bit, both are immensely pleased, with all of the family they have and will develop, and their future activities. Together they turned toward the guys and walked over, ready to go down to the planet they would call home for a while.

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