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 Finally, Bethany Anne spoke up "TOM and I been discussing his ''Gott Verdammt'' surprise revelation. Apparently, it is based on some bad experiences the Kurtherians had in their past. As we have no idea exactly how her personality was kept intact inside the computer, we'll take it one step at a time. We need to find out why she selectively redacted the information of how she got there.”14 Bethany Anne let loose a deep sigh, "Well, Boris, you need to go back in and find out why she hid this from us. It is still possible, no offense intended Gyada, that she might mean harm to us. Be careful. But find out her personal history."
-BC 03/15   Ivan, a supported of Boris and Romanovka, saw Sergeant Brogonovich talking to a tall Chinese fellow. Brogonovich had turned traitor, and been killed in the fighting. When he saw him, Ivan followed them to a bar, overhearing a planned attack on New Romanovka. He would need to tell Boris. Why on earth did the Chinese have an interest in New Romanovka?
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 Boris was worried about re-entering the Cage, but Janna and Gyada had talked, and Gyada had convinced her of the friendliness of whatever personality the machine contained. In some ways, she was potentially a better source of information on the computer’s intelligence than TOM. She had spent eight centuries communicating with it, after all. Many months ago she hadn't truly understood what a computer was. In theory, Gyada understood, but it was hard for someone from the Iron Age to comprehend their appearance or how they functioned. She felt from how people acted around computers that continuing to declare it 'her friend' would result in her opinion as being less valued. It may even convince them she was at least a little crazy. People seemed to consider computers tools, with no aspect of personage about them.  The computer speaks to Gyada while Boris waits, explaining that she wanted to live, and that there were parts of her programming she could not relate, until the blocks were removed. Gyada realizes that they would have to get ADAM to remove those parts, so that they could get her whole truth.

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+    '''Revelations''' deals with the investigation/reconstruction/battle of Konrad's NVG Research Base, in Archangelsk, Russia. Zakhar, Konrad's In-Charge, helped Boris with The Beast (Gyada), and the AI (Lilith)
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−	Story of Gyada and her past (See Characters[[Gyada]] ''Gyada's Past'')	+	Story of Gyada and her past (See Characters [[Gyada]] ''Gyada's Past'')

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 ====BC 03/9====
 Boris dreaded the day that Frank turned up. Gyada was reticent about her past. Bethany Anne was frustrated with Boris' slow progress in both deciphering the Beast, and extracting information from the computer. Boris needed more time. Finally, Boris was able to send a report on both counts. She explained her story, and Boris suggested that Marcus and TOM question her on things she might have learned from the AI, as she had already shown a quick adaptation to several items that were far beyond the era she was from.
-Gyada wanted to get out to see the world, and how it had changed, so was frustrated with being relegated to passive work. Gyada's restlessness and impatience hindered her integration into the modern world and the town. People found it uncomfortable to work with her for any length of time. None of the command group were comfortable with throwing her straight into the militia training programs. They had no idea how controlled she was. So Boris set aside a part of every morning for her to train with him and either Janna or Danislav and three of the wolves. Had long discussions on the ethics of war (See [[Gyada'' on ''Warfare''). She had a good understanding of the Etheric, and Marcus had described her theoretical understanding of Gravitics as exceptional. What else had she learned from that computer’s database?
+Gyada wanted to get out to see the world, and how it had changed, so was frustrated with being relegated to passive work. Gyada's restlessness and impatience hindered her integration into the modern world and the town. People found it uncomfortable to work with her for any length of time. None of the command group were comfortable with throwing her straight into the militia training programs. They had no idea how controlled she was. So Boris set aside a part of every morning for her to train with him and either Janna or Danislav and three of the wolves. Had long discussions on the ethics of war (See [[Gyada]] on ''Warfare''). She had a good understanding of the Etheric, and Marcus had described her theoretical understanding of Gravitics as exceptional. What else had she learned from that computer’s database?

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-Story of Gyada and her past (See Character, [[Gyada]] ''Gyada's Past'')
+Story of Gyada and her past (See Characters[[Gyada]] ''Gyada's Past'')
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 ====BC 03/19====
-At beginning of conversation, agreed to call Chaos is in Limited Options by nickname acronym, CILO, for ease in flow. (See Characters, CILO,   The History of the Rogue Expedition.)
+At beginning of conversation, agreed to call Chaos is in Limited Options by nickname acronym, CILO, for ease in flow. (See Characters, [[Chaos is in Limited Options, CILO ]] ''The History of the Rogue Expedition''.)
 She explains that her data cannot be accessed without her permission. I am willing to provide several prototype designs in exchange for the database I request. Although some may have flaws in real world development, I am sure some will be useful.
 Boris asks how Evgeni is doing, and she tells him she has enhanced him in some ways. I have removed several concerning cell clusters that could have become cancerous, fixed a mild heart defect, and improved his lung capacity. Also, I have corrected some imbalances and nutritional deficiencies. Two modifications are not complete. I have triggered increased body hair growth to aid in his survival in the conditions that exist in the near vicinity. I have also enabled his fingernails to grow significantly thicker and sharper by activating dormant genes to give him a natural weapon of self-defense.”
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-===Gyada, the Berserker, Lilith Choses her Name===
+===Gyada, the Berserker, Lilith Chooses her Name===
 ====BC 03/20====
 Gyada had changed her arm back, but was depressed. They concluded that her emotional state was linked to her ability to change.  The new computer personality had chosen her name – LILITH .

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−	'''Revelations''' deals with the investigation/reconstruction/battle of Konrad's NVG Research Base, in Archangelsk, Russia. Zakhar, Konrad's In-Charge, helped Boris with The Beast (Gyada), and the AI (Lilith	+	'''Revelations''' deals with the investigation/reconstruction/battle of Konrad's NVG Research Base, in Archangelsk, Russia. Zakhar, Konrad's In-Charge, helped Boris with The Beast (Gyada), and the AI (Lilith

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-'''''Revelations'''''Bold text''' deals with the investigation/reconstruction/battle of Konrad's NVG Research Base, in Archangelsk, Russia. Zakhar, Konrad's In-Charge, helped Boris with The Beast (Gyada), and the AI (Lilith
+'''''Revelations''' deals with the investigation/reconstruction/battle of Konrad's NVG Research Base, in Archangelsk, Russia. Zakhar, Konrad's In-Charge, helped Boris with The Beast (Gyada), and the AI (Lilith
 ===Boris, the Base, and the Beast===