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 Bethany Anne and Michael are going out on a date, to kick ass. She puts on her armor, and her new boots, made from a High Tortuga beast. She and Michael are dressed for a night out with pirates, and ArchAngel II.   Jean will sit with the twins while they go out, Jean promising that they will have a good, SAFE time.  Anne, Michael, Tabitha, Gabrielkle and the Bitches were in a transport pod, coming onto the ''ArchAngel II'', to go to Belv’th, their destination for the evening. It has a reputation in certain circles as being a place you can go to hide from the authorities.” They look at the maps ArchAngel II put up, and go explore. (See Locations, [[Belv’th]])  Bethany Anne and Michael will have the most fun, exploring the outlying areas.
-'''TKE02  Belv’th, Second City, Entertainment District'''  Tabitha, John and Scott go to bar, trolling for info. Coke? Pepsi? “We don’t trade in Federation goods around here. Local producers only.” And they sat and listened to a group of mercenaries who wanted to take the planet back from the humans, who had taken all of the profit out of everything. They’d take them out while they slept. Tabitha sent a couple of drones after them, they saw them, and came at them, to do away with the humans IN the bar!
+'''TKE02/4  Belv’th, Second City, Entertainment District'''  Tabitha, John and Scott go to bar, trolling for info. Coke? Pepsi? “We don’t trade in Federation goods around here. Local producers only.” And they sat and listened to a group of mercenaries who wanted to take the planet back from the humans, who had taken all of the profit out of everything. They’d take them out while they slept. Tabitha sent a couple of drones after them, they saw them, and came at them, to do away with the humans IN the bar!
 K’aia, a four-legged Yollin slave in the salt mines on Belv’the, carried her dead friend, Barien,  a human, to a place to hide, so that the guards wouldn’t find her and the body. She had killed the overseer who had shocked Barien to death, and was now escaping from the mines. She would take his body to the human town, then escape, to see if any of her own kind had survived. K’aia stumbled upon Bethany Anne and Michael, who would now enjoy a tussle with the score of guards who were following K’aia. The three of them kill all of the guards, and their Leath leader.

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 '''TKE02  Belv’th, Second City, Entertainment District'''  Tabitha, John and Scott go to bar, trolling for info. Coke? Pepsi? “We don’t trade in Federation goods around here. Local producers only.” And they sat and listened to a group of mercenaries who wanted to take the planet back from the humans, who had taken all of the profit out of everything. They’d take them out while they slept. Tabitha sent a couple of drones after them, they saw them, and came at them, to do away with the humans IN the bar!
-     K’aia, a four-legged Yollin slave in the salt mines on Belv’the, carried her dead friend, Barien,  a human, to a place to hide, so that the guards wouldn’t find her and the body. She had killed the overseer who had shocked Barien to death, and was now escaping from the mines. She would take his body to the human town, then escape, to see if any of her own kind had survived. K’aia stumbled upon Bethany Anne and Michael, who would now enjoy a tussle with the score of guards who were following K’aia. The three of them kill all of the guards, and their Leath leader.
-     '''Belv’th, First City, Bazaar'''   Gabrielle, Eric and Darryl find a nightclub, music. Tabitha mind-reads, find someone they might want to talk to.
+K’aia, a four-legged Yollin slave in the salt mines on Belv’the, carried her dead friend, Barien,  a human, to a place to hide, so that the guards wouldn’t find her and the body. She had killed the overseer who had shocked Barien to death, and was now escaping from the mines. She would take his body to the human town, then escape, to see if any of her own kind had survived. K’aia stumbled upon Bethany Anne and Michael, who would now enjoy a tussle with the score of guards who were following K’aia. The three of them kill all of the guards, and their Leath leader.
 '''TKE 02/5''' Tabitha, John and Scott destroy the bar in a fight started by the Shrillexian, against the humans.

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 '''TKE 02/3'''  Michael and William discuss when Michael will go on his hunt, and where Bethany Anne wants the BBQ pit installed. “She said, and I quote, ‘If you put that fucking grill anywhere I can smell the meat cooking, the first thing that’s getting cooked on it are your balls.’ William asks him how he’s going to ill the dinosaur, as it’s fifty feet tall and nasty. Will probably use Etheric energy to take it down.
-Bethany Anne and Michael are going out on a date, to kick ass. She puts on her armor, and her new boots, made from a High Tortuga beast. She and Michael are dressed for a night out with pirates, and ArchAngel II.   Jean will sit with the twins while they go out, Jean promising that they will have a good, SAFE time.  Anne, Michael, Tabitha, Gabrielkle and the Bitches were in a transport pod, coming onto the ''ArchAngel II'', to go to Belv’th, their destination for the evening. It has a reputation in certain circles as being a place you can go to hide from the authorities.” They look at the maps ArchAngel II put up, and go explore. (See Locations,[[Belv’th]])  Bethany Anne and Michael will have the most fun, exploring the outlying areas.
+Bethany Anne and Michael are going out on a date, to kick ass. She puts on her armor, and her new boots, made from a High Tortuga beast. She and Michael are dressed for a night out with pirates, and ArchAngel II.   Jean will sit with the twins while they go out, Jean promising that they will have a good, SAFE time.  Anne, Michael, Tabitha, Gabrielkle and the Bitches were in a transport pod, coming onto the ''ArchAngel II'', to go to Belv’th, their destination for the evening. It has a reputation in certain circles as being a place you can go to hide from the authorities.” They look at the maps ArchAngel II put up, and go explore. (See Locations, [[Belv’th]])  Bethany Anne and Michael will have the most fun, exploring the outlying areas.
 '''TKE02  Belv’th, Second City, Entertainment District'''  Tabitha, John and Scott go to bar, trolling for info. Coke? Pepsi? “We don’t trade in Federation goods around here. Local producers only.” And they sat and listened to a group of mercenaries who wanted to take the planet back from the humans, who had taken all of the profit out of everything. They’d take them out while they slept. Tabitha sent a couple of drones after them, they saw them, and came at them, to do away with the humans IN the bar!

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 Lance Reynolds meeting with two groups of Noel-ni, disagreeing on whether to involve the Federation in a problem of fulfilling a contract with the Q’Palmeretta. Might develop into a war if not fulfilled. This was the first real challenge to the nascent Federation where the ex-Empress wasn’t waiting in the wings to scare the miscreant children into behaving. Lance will take it under advisement.  Drazen, her second in command, didn’t want the Federation involved. Lance has suspicions about him.
-'''TKE 02/2'''   Lance had called Michael to tell him to help Bethany Anne not to over-react when they could not make it to the birthday Party because of a Federation concern. She still blamed it on the Leath.
+'''TKE 02/2'''   Lance had called Michael to tell him to help Bethany Anne not to over-react when they could not make it to the birthday party because of a Federation concern. She still blamed it on the Leath.
 At the Party, Tabitha gave Alexis a pair of glittery combat boots, and Gabriel an upgrade for his App suite – a whole new toolset which will work with all of his devices. Akio gave them their first blades (no edges, so they can learn). Ashur and Bellatrix brought them their two new puppies to meet, Zeus and Athena, who can mind-speak already.  Kids and puppies go to play, and disappear. They were found, all four of them, wandering in the Etheric. Question – How are they going to put a lock on the Etheric?
 Bethany Anne et al are looking for a planet on which  their rebels, the outcasts can thrive.
 '''TKE 02/3'''  Michael and William discuss when Michael will go on his hunt, and where Bethany Anne wants the BBQ pit installed. “She said, and I quote, ‘If you put that fucking grill anywhere I can smell the meat cooking, the first thing that’s getting cooked on it are your balls.’ William asks him how he’s going to ill the dinosaur, as it’s fifty feet tall and nasty. Will probably use Etheric energy to take it down.
-Bethany Anne and Michael are going out on a date, to kick ass. She puts on her armor, and her new boots, made from a High Tortuga beast. She and Michael are dressed for a night out with pirates, and ArchAngel II.   Jean will sit with the twins while they go out, Jean promising that they will have a good, SAFE time.  Anne, Michael, Tabitha, Gabrielkle and the Bitches were in a transport pod, coming onto the ''ArchAngel II'', to go to Belv’th, their destination for the evening. It has a reputation in certain circles as being a place you can go to hide from the authorities.” They look at the maps ArchAngel II put up, and go explore. (See Locations, [[Belv’th]])  Bethany Anne and Michael will have the most fun, exploring the outlying areas.
+Bethany Anne and Michael are going out on a date, to kick ass. She puts on her armor, and her new boots, made from a High Tortuga beast. She and Michael are dressed for a night out with pirates, and ArchAngel II.   Jean will sit with the twins while they go out, Jean promising that they will have a good, SAFE time.  Anne, Michael, Tabitha, Gabrielkle and the Bitches were in a transport pod, coming onto the ''ArchAngel II'', to go to Belv’th, their destination for the evening. It has a reputation in certain circles as being a place you can go to hide from the authorities.” They look at the maps ArchAngel II put up, and go explore. (See Locations,[[Belv’th]])  Bethany Anne and Michael will have the most fun, exploring the outlying areas.
 '''TKE02  Belv’th, Second City, Entertainment District'''  Tabitha, John and Scott go to bar, trolling for info. Coke? Pepsi? “We don’t trade in Federation goods around here. Local producers only.” And they sat and listened to a group of mercenaries who wanted to take the planet back from the humans, who had taken all of the profit out of everything. They’d take them out while they slept. Tabitha sent a couple of drones after them, they saw them, and came at them, to do away with the humans IN the bar!

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-'''TKE 02/ Prologue'''  Bethany Anne and TOM speak of development o the twins, Alexis and Gabriel (See Characters, [[The Twins]]. It is rapid (3 months to walking, potty trained), and Bethany Anne is complaining that they weren’t babies long enough, and wondering, when Alexis hit puberty, if Michael will kill all of the boys interested in her. TOM reassures her-
+'''TKE 02/ Prologue'''  Bethany Anne and TOM speak of development o the twins, Alexis and Gabriel (See Characters, [[The Twins]]). It is rapid (3 months to walking, potty trained), and Bethany Anne is complaining that they weren’t babies long enough, and wondering, when Alexis hit puberty, if Michael will kill all of the boys interested in her. TOM reassures her-
-The children will be fine, Bethany Anne. They have you and their father and ADAM and me and…well, I could go on all day. The point is that they have all of us to make sure they are healthy, happy, and well adjusted.”
+The children will be fine, Bethany Anne. They have you and their father and ADAM and me and… well, I could go on all day. The point is that they have all of us to make sure they are healthy, happy, and well adjusted.”
 TOM and Bethany Anne practice Etheric Immersion, Bethany Anne creating an image of herself there. Bethany Anne senses an Etheric storm, and TOM warns her NOT to go there! Not dangerous as long as you do not get entangled in one. Might be transported somewhere, either familiar or unfamiliar. ADAM finds all of this curious.
-'''TKE 02/1'''  Three years later. Scout ship QBSE ‘’Lorelei’’ destroyed in contact with alien planet. Sends torpedo back to HighTortuga, through Etheric, with information for Federation. (See Category Vehicles, [[QBSE Ships]]}
+'''TKE 02/1'''  Three years later. Scout ship QBSE ‘’Loralei’’ destroyed in contact with alien planet. Sends torpedo back to HighTortuga, through Etheric, with information for Federation. (See Category Vehicles, [[QBSE Ships]]}
-Lance Reynolds meeting with two groups of Noel-ni, disagreeing on whether to involve the Federation in a problem of fulfilling a contract with the Q’Palmeretta. Might develop into a war if not fulfilled. This was the first real challenge to the nascent Federation where the ex-Empress wasn’t waiting in the wings to scare the miscreant children into behaving. Lance will take it under advisement.  Drazen, her second in command, didn’t want the federation involved. Lance has suspicions about him.
+Lance Reynolds meeting with two groups of Noel-ni, disagreeing on whether to involve the Federation in a problem of fulfilling a contract with the Q’Palmeretta. Might develop into a war if not fulfilled. This was the first real challenge to the nascent Federation where the ex-Empress wasn’t waiting in the wings to scare the miscreant children into behaving. Lance will take it under advisement.  Drazen, her second in command, didn’t want the Federation involved. Lance has suspicions about him.
-'''TKE 02/2'''   Lance had called Michael to tell him to help Bethany Anne not to over-react when they could not make it to the Birthday Party because of a Federation concern. She still blamed it on the Leath.
+'''TKE 02/2'''   Lance had called Michael to tell him to help Bethany Anne not to over-react when they could not make it to the birthday Party because of a Federation concern. She still blamed it on the Leath.
 At the Party, Tabitha gave Alexis a pair of glittery combat boots, and Gabriel an upgrade for his App suite – a whole new toolset which will work with all of his devices. Akio gave them their first blades (no edges, so they can learn). Ashur and Bellatrix brought them their two new puppies to meet, Zeus and Athena, who can mind-speak already.  Kids and puppies go to play, and disappear. They were found, all four of them, wandering in the Etheric. Question – How are they going to put a lock on the Etheric?
 Bethany Anne et al are looking for a planet on which  their rebels, the outcasts can thrive.
 '''TKE 02/3'''  Michael and William discuss when Michael will go on his hunt, and where Bethany Anne wants the BBQ pit installed. “She said, and I quote, ‘If you put that fucking grill anywhere I can smell the meat cooking, the first thing that’s getting cooked on it are your balls.’ William asks him how he’s going to ill the dinosaur, as it’s fifty feet tall and nasty. Will probably use Etheric energy to take it down.
-Bethany Anne and Michael are going out on a date, to kick ass. She puts on her armor, and her new boots, made from a High Tortuga beast. She and Michael are dressed for a night out with pirates, and ArchAngel II.   Jean will sit with the twins while they go out, Jean promising that they will have a good, SAFE time.  Anne, Michael, Tabitha, Gabrielkle and the Bitches were in a transport pod, coming onto the ArchAngel, to go to Belv’th, their destination for the evening. It has a reputation in certain circles as being a place you can go to hide from the authorities.” They look at the maps ArchAngel II put up, and go explore. (See Locations, [[Belv’th]])  Bethany Anne and Michael will have the most fun, exploring the outlying areas.
+Bethany Anne and Michael are going out on a date, to kick ass. She puts on her armor, and her new boots, made from a High Tortuga beast. She and Michael are dressed for a night out with pirates, and ArchAngel II.   Jean will sit with the twins while they go out, Jean promising that they will have a good, SAFE time.  Anne, Michael, Tabitha, Gabrielkle and the Bitches were in a transport pod, coming onto the ''ArchAngel II'', to go to Belv’th, their destination for the evening. It has a reputation in certain circles as being a place you can go to hide from the authorities.” They look at the maps ArchAngel II put up, and go explore. (See Locations, [[Belv’th]])  Bethany Anne and Michael will have the most fun, exploring the outlying areas.
-'''TKE02/4'''    Belv’th, Second City, Entertainment District  Tabitha, John and Scott go to bar, trolling for info. Thery asked for Coke? Pepsi? “We don’t trade in Federation goods around TKE here. Local producers only.” And they sat and listened to a group of mercenaries who wanted to take the planet back from the humans, who had taken all of the profit out of everything. They’d take them out while they slept. Tabitha sent a couple of drones after them, they saw them, and came at them, to do away with the humans IN the bar!
+'''TKE02  Belv’th, Second City, Entertainment District'''  Tabitha, John and Scott go to bar, trolling for info. Coke? Pepsi? “We don’t trade in Federation goods around here. Local producers only.” And they sat and listened to a group of mercenaries who wanted to take the planet back from the humans, who had taken all of the profit out of everything. They’d take them out while they slept. Tabitha sent a couple of drones after them, they saw them, and came at them, to do away with the humans IN the bar!
-      K’aia, a four-legged Yollin slave in the slat mines on Belv’th, carried her dead friend, Barien,  a human, to a place to hide, so that the guards wouldn’t find her and the body. She had killed h overseer who had shocked Barien to death, and was now escaping from the mines. She would take his body to the human town, then escape, to see if any of her own kind had survived. K’aia stumbled upon Bethany Anne and Michael, who would now enjoy a tussle with the score of guards who were following K’aia. The three of them kill all of the guards, and their Leath leader.
+      K’aia, a four-legged Yollin slave in the salt mines on Belv’the, carried her dead friend, Barien,  a human, to a place to hide, so that the guards wouldn’t find her and the body. She had killed the overseer who had shocked Barien to death, and was now escaping from the mines. She would take his body to the human town, then escape, to see if any of her own kind had survived. K’aia stumbled upon Bethany Anne and Michael, who would now enjoy a tussle with the score of guards who were following K’aia. The three of them kill all of the guards, and their Leath leader.
-      Belv’th, First City, Bazaar   Gabrielle, Rric and Darryl find a nightclub, music. Tabitha mind-reads, find someone they might want to talk to.
+      '''Belv’th, First City, Bazaar'''   Gabrielle, Eric and Darryl find a nightclub, music. Tabitha mind-reads, find someone they might want to talk to.
 '''TKE 02/5''' Tabitha, John and Scott destroy the bar in a fight started by the Shrillexian, against the humans.
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 Tabitha likes the planet. She “feels” the minds of the people on the planes above them, and they feel free, and they’re proud and happy. And they even find a prize-fighting match going on, between a Baka and another nine-foot lizard-looking alien.
-Gabrielle, Darryl and Eric find an empty mercenary town, look for info, find offices of Melien, who have just shown up. Planet needs some cleaning up, but will do as the Nee Devon.
+Gabrielle, Darryl and Eric find an empty mercenary town, look for info, find offices of Melien, who has just shown up. Planet needs some cleaning up, but will do as the New Devon.
-'''TKE 02/6''' As the group on their date clean up the town, Alexis and Gabriel awake, disturbed by the
+'''TKE 02/6''' As the group on their date clean up the town, Alexis and Gabriel awaken, disturbed by the
-dreams” they are having of their parents in a serious fight, and talk to their nursery EI, Phyrro, asking it if their Mom and Dadare OK. They are told yes, and they then ask if they might see where they are and what they are doing. Phyrro asks Jean if it would be OK, and she said yes. Let them see what they have as a heritage, smirking as she said so. Phyrro set them up in a viewing room, showing them a heavily edited run of what was happening on New Devon. The children seem to know what their parents are fighting for, and doze off as they watched.
+dreams” they are having of their parents in a serious fight, and talk to their nursery EI, Phyrro, asking it if their Mom and Dad are OK. They are told yes, and they then ask if they might see where they are and what they are doing. Phyrro asks Jean if it would be OK, and she said yes. Let them see what they have as a heritage, smirking as she said so. Phyrro set them up in a viewing room, showing them a heavily edited run of what was happening on New Devon. The children seem to know what their parents are fighting for, and doze off as they watched.
 There are three mercenary towns to check. Bethany Anne and Michael too k care of one, Tabitha John and  Scott are fighting at another, and Darryl, Eric and Gabrielle are at another. Tabitha needs help, so they will all go there to finish off what is needed. Tabitha gets the big guns working to take out the three ships attacking them, and the other two teams are on their way to help. Baba Yaga appeared, walking on air, pushing waves of fear ahead of her, to help her.