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     One man leaves the life of a lawman behind him and works to clean up a new area in space. On the planet now known as High Tortuga, the mine workers are far too close to being slaves so the ruler of the planet shut them down. Except for the mine owned by Venfirdri Lan. He's taken his mine off the grid and decided to keep everything running. With no need to pay the workers, profits should be good. After all, who's going to stop him? He had no idea there was a new type of man working for justice on the planet. A man named Barnabas. In fact, he didn't even know who Barnabas was. But he's about to. Barnabas may not be Ranger One anymore, but one thing definitely has not changed: when someone screws over the powerless, Barnabas is going to bring the pain. With a bloodthirsty AI running his advanced spaceship, those who love evil should start looking over their shoulders. Life just got a lot more fun.
-    One man leaves the life of a lawman behind him and works to clean up a new area in space. On the planet now known as High Tortuga, the mine workers are far too close to being slaves so the ruler of the planet shut them down.Except for the mine owned by Venfirdri Lan. He's taken his mine off the grid and decided to keep everything running. With no need to pay the workers, profits should be good.After all, who's going to stop him?He had no idea there was a new type of man working for justice on the planet. A man named Barnabas. In fact, he didn't even know who Barnabas was. But he's about to. Barnabas may not be Ranger One anymore, but one thing definitely has not changed: when someone screws over the powerless, Barnabas is going to bring the pain. With a bloodthirsty AI running his advanced spaceship, those who love evil should start looking over their shoulders. Life just got a lot more fun.
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     One man leaves the life of a lawman behind him and works to clean up a new area in space. On the planet now known as High Tortuga, the mine workers are far too close to being slaves so the ruler of the planet shut them down.Except for the mine owned by Venfirdri Lan. He's taken his mine off the grid and decided to keep everything running. With no need to pay the workers, profits should be good.After all, who's going to stop him?He had no idea there was a new type of man working for justice on the planet. A man named Barnabas. In fact, he didn't even know who Barnabas was. But he's about to. Barnabas may not be Ranger One anymore, but one thing definitely has not changed: when someone screws over the powerless, Barnabas is going to bring the pain. With a bloodthirsty AI running his advanced spaceship, those who love evil should start looking over their shoulders. Life just got a lot more fun.
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 He hoped this would be an important lesson in perspective and data sources.
 Barnabas wondered how long it would take her to realize it. His lips twitched as he nodded to her avatar. “Would you like the first move?”

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 '''TVC 01/23'''     Jutkelon and Lan were trapped on Lan’s estate – locked up in the building, all systems off. Shinigami was in their system, watching, letting Barnabas know what they were doing. Then the doors unlocked, allowing them to go to the troop carrier. If they got in the troop carrier the ship might shoot them down, but if they stayed here it would definitely kill them. “I’m going to count down,” she told them. “Anyone still in this bunker when I reach zero can stay in here for the rest of time. Five. Four…”  They piled out into the daylight, Jutkelon still bellowing for them to get to the carrier, all of them, now—only to have tiny projectiles rain down on the stretch of ground between them and the ship.
 When they all went eerily silent, Lan knew something worse had happened. Barnabas stood alone in the courtyard, so still that Lan would have guessed he was a statue. Behind them, the doors to the bunker slammed shut and locked. Barnabas looked at Jutkelon. “You could end all this, you know. You could surrender. You don’t have to protect Lan. You never had to. How many more soldiers do you really want to sacrifice here?” “As many as it takes!” They all fought, Barnabas destroying the mercenaries, and then Jutkelon himself.
- Lan ran to a tower for one of the machine guns there, what he considered their best hope. When he got to the gun, he had to lean against it as he watched the massacre below. Then Jutkelon attacked Barnabas personally. Lan ran, as the Ubuara watched him.
+Lan ran to a tower for one of the machine guns there, what he considered their best hope. When he got to the gun, he had to lean against it as he watched the massacre below. Then Jutkelon attacked Barnabas personally. Lan ran, as the Ubuara watched him.
 Some of the men, who had managed to load into the carrier, took off, with Shinigami watching.

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 As he is being escorted to Lan’s, he sees an Ubuara, and forces a mental thought into his mind - Aebura has not forgotten you. I am here to help. Be patient. All will be made well
-TVC 01/10     Barnabas met with Lan and Gar. They inquired as to the. He gave a stock answer. “I have simply learned that in places like this which are undergoing rapid expansion, things are always fraught. There is...progress, and at the same time, there are those who are not prepared to sacrifice to see that progress achieved. There can be a collision of people with different laws from different societies.”
+TVC 01/10     Barnabas met with Lan and Gar. They inquired as to the source of his knowledge. He gave a stock answer. “I have simply learned that in places like this which are undergoing rapid expansion, things are always fraught. There is...progress, and at the same time, there are those who are not prepared to sacrifice to see that progress achieved. There can be a collision of people with different laws from different societies.”
 “During my travels, I have found that I have a talent for aligning expectations,” Barnabas offered. He wished only to restore peace to this place. So they summoned Chogaru, who would circulate among the workers, find out what Barnabas was telling them.