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 '''MICHAEL RETURNS''' to fulfill a promise to his love, but the world isn't the same place.Michael, the Archangel himself, has returned after a hundred and fifty years reconstructing himself in the Etheric Dimension.  The problem?  The world went through an Apocalypse and what little honor and justice that previously existed, is gone. Further, his love has left to the stars somewhere, fighting for those on Earth.Now, Michael has to figure out where he is, where he needs to go, help those who need help and figure out how to follow in his love's path. Because if there is one thing that Honor Demands, it is that he make good on his promise to Bethany Anne.
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	01/23 Michael goes out, tries to understand city more. Comes across vamps/weres attacking Enforcers. Kills Enforcers Can feel massive amount of Etheric Energy approaching New York. Sees airships hovering, vamps and Nosferatu descending on ropes, waiting to feast on people below. Jonathan and Nosferatu boss watching as Nosferatu began to descend. Michael. Disabled ship, floated away, crashed into water. Attacks Nosferatu on ground with Etheric energy, electrical, killing them, killing Amedaeusz because of his mental connection with his “people”. Jonathan already dead. Michael kills Kelvin, trying to escape. Saves Valerie an honorable vamp, Donovan’s sister, whom Donovan had set up to die in Europe. Valerie kills Donovan in fair fight.		01/23 Michael goes out, tries to understand city more. Comes across vamps/weres attacking Enforcers. Kills Enforcers Can feel massive amount of Etheric Energy approaching New York. Sees airships hovering, vamps and Nosferatu descending on ropes, waiting to feast on people below. Jonathan and Nosferatu boss watching as Nosferatu began to descend. Michael. Disabled ship, floated away, crashed into water. Attacks Nosferatu on ground with Etheric energy, electrical, killing them, killing Amedaeusz because of his mental connection with his “people”. Jonathan already dead. Michael kills Kelvin, trying to escape. Saves Valerie an honorable vamp, Donovan’s sister, whom Donovan had set up to die in Europe. Valerie kills Donovan in fair fight.

−	01/24 Michael finds Valerie has enough honor to trust her with cleaning up USA, while he goes to Europe to handle The Duke, and whatever of his children were causing problems there. (See Characters, Valerie, )	+	01/24 Michael finds Valerie has enough honor to trust her with cleaning up USA, while he goes to Europe to handle The Duke, and whatever of his children were causing problems there. (See Characters, [[Valerie]], )

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     '''MICHAEL RETURNS''' to fulfill a promise to his love, but the world isn't the same place.Michael, the Archangel himself, has returned after a hundred and fifty years reconstructing himself in the Etheric Dimension.  The problem?  The world went through an Apocalypse and what little honor and justice that previously existed, is gone. Further, his love has left to the stars somewhere, fighting for those on Earth.Now, Michael has to figure out where he is, where he needs to go, help those who need help and figure out how to follow in his love's path. Because if there is one thing that Honor Demands, it is that he make good on his promise to Bethany Anne.
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 /25     '''TRIP TO EUROPE'''     Captain Miles O’Banion finds Michael on his ship. Captain unhappy with situation, wants Nosferatu off his ship, just wants to go back home. Michael cleans up ship, including crew who wants to turn pirate. Michael bought ship, renamed it DMS ArchAngel, and sailed off to England.
 Akio moves toward New York City/State, looking for him.

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-    '''MICHAEL RETURNS''' to fulfill a promise to his love, but the world isn't the same place.
+    '''MICHAEL RETURNS''' to fulfill a promise to his love, but the world isn't the same place.Michael, the Archangel himself, has returned after a hundred and fifty years reconstructing himself in the Etheric Dimension.  The problem?  The world went through an Apocalypse and what little honor and justice that previously existed, is gone. Further, his love has left to the stars somewhere, fighting for those on Earth.Now, Michael has to figure out where he is, where he needs to go, help those who need help and figure out how to follow in his love's path. Because if there is one thing that Honor Demands, it is that he make good on his promise to Bethany Anne.

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-'''MICHAEL RETURNS''' to fulfill a promise to his love, but the world isn't the same place.
+   '''MICHAEL RETURNS''' to fulfill a promise to his love, but the world isn't the same place.
 Michael, the Archangel himself, has returned after a hundred and fifty years reconstructing himself in the Etheric Dimension.
 The problem?  The world went through an Apocalypse and what little honor and justice that previously existed, is gone. Further, his love has left to the stars somewhere, fighting for those on Earth.Now, Michael has to figure out where he is, where he needs to go, help those who need help and figure out how to follow in his love's path. Because if there is one thing that Honor Demands, it is that he make good on his promise to Bethany Anne.

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 Michael takes Jacqueline to house, shows her around. Three floors below, floors above, hermetically sealed for centuries.
 Continues training in Michael’s house, doing kata on his training mats, practicing focus and intent.
 Billy “The Bomb” Wattson, big, black, an Enforcer, vows to catch a vampire that night.
 Clothes shopping! Mysts out of the house startling Jacqueline.
 Michael goes out to check the city, “reads” a mind (Mark) screaming in fear. Had been at his sister’s house. How had they found him?
 “Reads” four men chasing him-vampire hunters. Four against one, cornered in an alley. Michael takes them all on, kills them.
-Brings Mark home, introduces him to Jacqueline, talks about blood, energy, and the Etheric. Gives energy to Mark, Jacqueline.
-Michael goes out, tries to understand city more. Comes across vamps/weres attacking Enforcers. Kills Enforcers Can feel massive amount of Etheric Energy approaching New York. Sees airships hovering, vamps and Nosferatu descending on ropes, waiting to feast on people below. Jonathan and Nosferatu boss watching as Nosferatu began to descend. Michael. Disabled ship, floated away, crashed into water. Attacks Nosferatu on ground with Etheric energy, electrical, killing them, killing Amedaeusz because of his mental connection with his “people”. Jonathan already dead. Michael kills Kelvin, trying to escape. Saves Valerie an honorable vamp, Donovan’s sister, whom Donovan had set up to die in Europe. Valerie kills Donovan in fair fight.
+/22Brings Mark home, introduces him to Jacqueline, talks about blood, energy, and the Etheric. Gives energy to Mark, Jacqueline.
-Michael finds Valerie has enough honor to trust her with cleaning up USA, while he goes to Europe to handle The Duke, and whatever of his children were causing problems there. (See Valerie, in characters)

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−	01/14 '''JACQUELINE'S TRAINING''' Michael begins physical training, upgrading efforts daily. Observational training, punishing lack of observance with push-ups, fight training, with pain as punishment. She finally made him sweat, and felt victorious. (15 days, until flight to New York)	+	01/14, 20 '''JACQUELINE'S TRAINING''' Michael begins physical training, upgrading efforts daily. Observational training, punishing lack of observance with push-ups, fight training, with pain as punishment. She finally made him sweat, and felt victorious. (15 days, until flight to New York)
	Continues training in Michael’s house, doing kata on his training mats, practicing focus and intent.		Continues training in Michael’s house, doing kata on his training mats, practicing focus and intent.
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		+	01/16, 18 '''FLIGHT TO NEW YORK''' Michael visits Paul Mullin, with Jacqueline and Kerri. Paul promises to change ways, to be ethical and honest, on Kerri’s life, or his own. She would kill him if he strayed, or Michael would kill her in his stead.
		+	Brick Jessims, blood dealer, sends letter to Paul in Chicago, wants to visit, resume sales. Killed by Kerri before he can make it to the house.
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		+	01/17 - 24 '''NEW YORK''' Jacqueline gets in fight with Enforcers, toughs who captured weres and vampires in New York. Almost beats them all, is rescued by Michael. Attacked again in park (Gramercy Park South) on way to Michael’s, subdued them, let them go. Went to his old home facing side of park.
		+	Deaths of 4 reported to Enforcer Control by regular police.
		+	Michael takes Jacqueline to house, shows her around. Three floors below, floors above, hermetically sealed for centuries.
		+	Continues training in Michael’s house, doing kata on his training mats, practicing focus and intent.
		+	Billy “The Bomb” Wattson, big, black, an Enforcer, vows to catch a vampire that night.
		+	Clothes shopping! Mysts out of the house startling Jacqueline.
		+	Michael goes out to check the city, “reads” a mind (Mark) screaming in fear. Had been at his sister’s house. How had they found him?
		+	“Reads” four men chasing him-vampire hunters. Four against one, cornered in an alley. Michael takes them all on, kills them.
		+	Brings Mark home, introduces him to Jacqueline, talks about blood, energy, and the Etheric. Gives energy to Mark, Jacqueline.
		+	Michael goes out, tries to understand city more. Comes across vamps/weres attacking Enforcers. Kills Enforcers Can feel massive amount of Etheric Energy approaching New York. Sees airships hovering, vamps and Nosferatu descending on ropes, waiting to feast on people below. Jonathan and Nosferatu boss watching as Nosferatu began to descend. Michael. Disabled ship, floated away, crashed into water. Attacks Nosferatu on ground with Etheric energy, electrical, killing them, killing Amedaeusz because of his mental connection with his “people”. Jonathan already dead. Michael kills Kelvin, trying to escape. Saves Valerie an honorable vamp, Donovan’s sister, whom Donovan had set up to die in Europe. Valerie kills Donovan in fair fight.
		+	Michael finds Valerie has enough honor to trust her with cleaning up USA, while he goes to Europe to handle The Duke, and whatever of his children were causing problems there. (See Valerie, in characters)
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-/2, 3, 4     Jeremiah gets message delivered by Jack Childer’s men that Sara must either sell out to him or bed him, or else. Hands hear of message, decide to join Childers rather than fight for Sarah. Three hands, on camp-out, meet Michael, take him to Ranch to meet with Sarah. Fights with her to establish abilities, confidence. Michael bests her, she accepts his help, then sends him off, naming him “dark messiah”.
+/2, 3, 4     Jeremiah gets message delivered by Jack Childer’s men that Sara must either sell out to him or bed him, or else. Hands hear of message, decide to join Childers rather than fight for Sarah. Three hands, on camp-out, meet Michael, take him to Ranch to meet with Sarah. Fights with her to establish abilities, confidence. Michael bests her, she accepts his help, then sends him off, naming him '''“Dark Messiah”'''.
 /5, 6     Battle at the ranch. One hour after sunset. Childers sent in messenger for answer, messenger killed. Battle begins, Michael appears, taking men out from the behind. Scalp ceased, sends out wave of fear, upsetting horses and men. Thirty three dead. Sarah Jennifer apologizes to her men, asks Jeremiah to marry her. After town battle, Michael to Sarah’s ranch. Sarah apologizes, now with Jeremiah. Michael reveals that Sarah is pregnant. Michael follows attackers to Childer’s town, finishes off rest of his gang wreaking vengeance for type of horrors they had committed. Meets Jacqueline, a werewolf, returns her sight (removed silver fragment).  Supplied Jacqueline to go to Denver.
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