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     Another kind of magic represented in this age and area - that of control and power, and what the "good people", the mystics, did about it.
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 ===Introductory Review===
-====AND 01/1; AND 01/3; AND 01/6====
+{{ch|01}}
 Julianne has returned from her battles in Arcadia (freeing the city from Adrien, with Hannah and Zeke), to find that tensions were high at the Mystics’ Temple. None of them had ever participated in politically motivated activities before, and they were investigating, through storied illusions, what might happen to them if they took various paths in the future. Some stories foretold the extinction of the mystics, some told of their survival and expansion, all IF…
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 ===Donna===
-====AND 01/2, 3; AND 01/4; AND 01/5====
+{{ch|02}}
 A knock was heard at the door, and, when answered, Donna and five others strode in. They were dressed in blue robes with a strange sun symbol, and seemed to almost take command of the place. Dinner enough for all? Rooms?
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 ===Jullianne's Preparations and Departure===
-====AND 01/7; AND 01/8; AND 01/10, 11; AND 01/12====
+{{ch|07}}
 Scheduling, paper work, money counted out, horses readied, packing, talking to Margit, who warns her that to bring Artemis back would entail a huge fight, as he doesn’t give a damn about people, doesn’t understand them enough to care, has no “better nature” or “sense of guilt”. To succeed, she needs to make it a challenge for him, a puzzle that needs answers. Julianne listens, agrees, goes to bed, sleeps, and has horrible dreams. Not dreams, Illusions! She shoved them out, freeing her mind.
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 ===Julianne's Story===
-====AND 01/13; AND 01/14====
+{{ch|13}}
 As Barton and Gus came abreast, pleasantries were given, Gus giving Julianne a butterfly pin he had not sold (Insects were no longer popular). Suddenly, Barton attacks Julianne, accusing her of stealing the pin. Julianne forces hers into his mind, finding and ejecting a foreign presence that had altered his thoughts. Barton fell., Garrett attacks Gus, who had been attacking Bette. Gus wounded. It’s OK. He didn’t mean to!
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 ===The Gates of Arcadia===
-====AND 01/16, 17; AND 01/18====
+{{ch|16}}
 At the Queen’s Inn. Mystics tolerated, but don’t press their luck. Bastian critical of young girl working in a bar. Would be OK if it were a boy. Garrett feels same way. Julianne gets word that Amelia, Chancellor, would like to meet with her immediately, so showers, dresses, goes off with Garrett as guard to the Academy. Danil, Bastian, Bette stay there.
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 ===The Madlands; The Attack===
-====AND 01/19; AND 01/20, 21; AND 01/22; AND 01/23; AND 01/24; AND 01/25====
+{{ch|19}}
-Marcus reviews rules.Travel fast. Don’ split up, EVER. Leave no one behind, or they’re dead. No fires. No loud noises. No hunting, remnants can smell fresh blood from miles away. If in a bad place, sacrifice a horse. Gives Bastian a magitech weapon. Blew a piece out of a tree. Only a stop-gap, until Marcus could get there. Bastian doesn’t know how to fight- Anticipate, predict, plan.
+{{ch|20}}
 Julianne glad to have Marcus, as Danil and Bastian both liabilities in their way.
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 ===The Cottage===
-====AND 01/26; AND 01/27; AND 01/28; AND 01/29====
+{{ch|26}}
 Mariana, an older woman who lives alone in her cottage, answered the door when Bette knocked, granting them shelter and food as they needed it in return for work on her property. All were able to clean up, water and brush the horses, etc., Annie was happy to have them. Bette sewed up Marcus’ wound.
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 ===The Village===
-====AND 01/30====
+{{ch|30}}
 Julianne, Bastian, and Danil walk into town, information only. Don’t want to start a fight without others there for back-up. Wore their robes, as easier to camouflage. Farmer’s mind was fixated on his next high, but lethargic. Tested mind of one of the mystics. Stronger than a normal person, so didn’t penetrate. Was frustrated because didn’t know extent of enemies’ power, or unknown weaknesses. Helped a person suffering a punishment, left him with knowledge to remember it. Passed people going into town, all with gifts for their Masters. Masters used  a crude combination of mind control, softening of the will, and torture mixed with lavish heaping of reward for doing as the masters wished.
 ===Lilly===
-====AND 01/31, 32; AND 01/33; AND 01/34; AND 01/35; AND 01/36; AND 01/37; AND 01/38; AND 01/39; AND 01/40====
+{{ch|31}}
 Group sees a Master had hit a child, ad was striding off with her ovrer his shoulder. Julianne recognizes Lilly (animal magic), and determines to go after her to rescues her. Julianne turns herself into an illusion of Master August, with Danil and Bastian as her new associates. Goes into shed, finds guard leaning over Lilly.
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 ===After the Fray===
-====AND 01/41====
+{{ch|41}}
 It was all my fault, said Artemis. I didn’t mean to. I was researching. You can’t study a spell without a subject. I didn't think he'd do… well, all that. He (Rogan) said he just wanted to be my friend. He probably didn’t mean it. Most don't.” “It takes approximately three days to reverse the spell, then twelve more weeks for full rehabilitation.  “So, you can undo the spell that made them his lackeys? Free these mystics and the rest of the town?

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 Another kind of magic represented in this age and area - that of control and power, and what the "good people", the mystics, did about it.
 ===Introductory Review===

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 Another kind of magic represented in this age and area - that of control and power, and what the "good people", the mystics, did about it.
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 Artemis agrees to help reverse all of the spells, damage he had caused, because it was all his fault. Once that's done, we can hunt down August——and try to find Rogan. And we deal with him—permanently.” Problem solved.

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 ===Donna===
 ====AND 01/2, 3; AND 01/4; AND 01/5====
-A knock was heard at the door, and, when answered, Donna and five others strode in. They were dressed in blue robes with a strange sun symbol, and seemed to almost take command of the place. Dinner enough for all? Rooms? -insertlinehere-
+A knock was heard at the door, and, when answered, Donna and five others strode in. They were dressed in blue robes with a strange sun symbol, and seemed to almost take command of the place. Dinner enough for all? Rooms?
 Julianne didn’t want a war with Donna, and didn’t want a war to destroy the mystics. Will allow Donna to plead her case the next morning, and all decisions concerning anything will be made by the group, not by any one person.

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-Another kind of magic represented in this age and area - that of control and power, and what the "good people", the mystics, did about it.
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 ===Introductory Review===
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 At a meeting after the dismissal of Donna and her group Charles, Melanie, Jonsen, Danil, and Gunther), all voice their concerns for group while she is gone.
-Julianne tells them of her warped mind, and of Rogan. Danil worries about the strength of her shields, Melanie and all agree that they would need to hunker down, close the doors, and lay low until she came back. Danil proposed that all who knew any battle magic would pass it along, Self-defense training to be started (half of mystics ready in a month), that they needed more recruits, and that a message should be sent to Arcadia about donna (Julianne to send).
+Jullianne tells them of her warped mind, and of Rogan. Daril worries about the strength of her shields, Melanie and all agree that they would need to hunker down, close the doors, and lay low until she came back. Danil proposed that all who knew any battle magic would pass it along, Self-defense training to be started (half of mystics ready in a month), that they needed more recruits, and that a message should be sent to Arcadia about donna (Julianne to send).
 Julianne would be leaving the next day – she NEEDS solitude after rescue of Arcadias, death of Selah, and Donna’a appearance. Would try to find out more about Rogan, find Artemis who had been an expert in battle magic when he left.
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 ===Donna===
 ====AND 01/2, 3; AND 01/4; AND 01/5====
+A knock was heard at the door, and, when answered, Donna and five others strode in. They were dressed in blue robes with a strange sun symbol, and seemed to almost take command of the place. Dinner enough for all? Rooms?
 Julianne didn’t want a war with Donna, and didn’t want a war to destroy the mystics. Will allow Donna to plead her case the next morning, and all decisions concerning anything will be made by the group, not by any one person.
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 The next morning Donna is given the floor to discuss her requests, etc. Donna (eyes white with magic) showed a world where a young girl, who had already toppled evil leaders, would lead the world into a new dawn. This girl seized her destiny, and pushed on to defeat the bigger threat—the evil of mankind. She stormed the gates of Arcadia, wiping the area clean of the vermin, smiting those who lived in squalor, stealing and gambling their lives away. When she finished, those who lacked the empathy and wisdom of the mystics were cowed. We, the New Dawn, wish to help. We will provide trained fighters to stand by your side as you bring the mystics of Irth into their rightful place, as we have in our own lands.” Julianne lashed out with her mental power, anger fueling her. All people left the room, leaving Donna and Julianne (fortified with minds of Danil, Zoe, Margit and Aldred, alone.
-Julianne, accusingly spoke. You’re not doing this for the benefit of society’s dregs; you’re doing it for your leader. What kind of hold does he have over you?”
+Jullianne, accusingly spoke. You’re not doing this for the benefit of society’s dregs; you’re doing it for your leader. What kind of hold does he have over you?”
 “He (Rogan) showed me the truth. These people aren’t worth saving, but they can be of use.” Julianne pushed against Donna’s shields, and  figure formed before her eyes. A man, strong and beautiful, along with a feeling of pure desire. Not lust, but a desire to please, to perform like a marionette on strings for the man. Think, Donna! He’s got your head twisted so far backwards you can’t tell up from down.”

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	If Donna returned while she was gone, lock the doors and retreat to the safety of the Temple.		If Donna returned while she was gone, lock the doors and retreat to the safety of the Temple.
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